I read your latest post on KKR's win... Here are my comments
You have written an article about KKR's win, yet Gautam Gambhir's name does not appear once in this whole article...
'Manish Tiwari finished the game with two consecutive fours' -- It's Manoj Tiwary. It takes a minute to check people's names...
On the whole the article was Insipid and Amateurish. Please don't take your audience for granted...
Your profile says you are an Enthusiastic writer. I am sure you are no where close in being one...
You took ten minutes of my time which i am never getting back...