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Hey.
I just got your message and even though it was already edited, I found some more areas to edit. Take a look at the changes and I hope they help. It was a very interesting article.
Maya
Hey Edward
One of Serie A's most classic fixtures take place this Sunday, have a look and leave a comment if you wish.
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/92291-serie-a-preview-juventus-v-ac-milan
Cheers!
Hey Edward.
Sorry I wasn't online yesterday, and it looks like it has already been edited. I looked at it and didn't have any more changes to be made. Nicely done. Let me know when you write another one, and hopefully I can take a look at it before another editor attacks it :)
Take care,
Maya
No problem Edward.
Looks good to me.
Yea whenever in doubt just make your paragraphs as short as possible and avoid run-on sentences.
You will get more used to the B/R style as you write some more and get more edits and feedback.
Let me know when you write another article and I'll take a look at it.
Take care,
Maya