The Four Defenders Of Edwin Van Der Sar
11/18/2008
I'm Pete, 17 and am in my last year of 6th form now, studying english (lit+lang), business and media. I love sport, especially football and wwe...the important ones ;). Was born a Man Utd fan and will die as one, so expect some bias reports! Saw a friend writing on here and thought it looked like abit of fun, so thought i'd give it a go.
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Guido said...
DeleteI'm actually trying to read most new articles every day so I read yours as well. I actually liked reading it and decided to edit it in an attempt to make it even better. Apart from just reading back what you've written, it's all about listening to the more experienced editors like Alex Dimond and heed their advice. Just try and develop your own style and you should definitely read this article on how to become a better writer:
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/79416-the-route-to-the-top-making-it-in-the-world-football-community
375 days ago