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Michael...I am a huge fan of yours!!! I love your writing style too! Keep up the good work!! God bless you!! P.S. I can't believe your mom wouldn't let you stay up to watch the 1993 World Series when you were 5 yrs. old...that's terrible....but it was past your bedtime!!! How nice is she to tape it for you!!! LOL ....sounds like a great mom to me!! Love you !!! :)
Hey, Who are the Top 5 NBA Teams Going Into The 2009/10 Season?
I enjoyed your article on Kaelin. As for suggestions, while informative, it seemed long, involved and used adjectives for effect. Pick a theme, suggested by your title, and make it as tight as you can around that theme - A Killer Among Us, or ND Volleyball: This Beauty is Locked and Loaded. I would build around that theme - recruits intimidated, kill shots, key games, attitude. Take it to a climax - the St John's game facing off against another assassin. Weave in the life events of growing up, high school, the injury if you can tie it to your theme. "All has not been easy" or "the killer was on the shelf" type of transition statement. End with something personal, personal hopes, team goals.
Thanks for sharing it with me.
Are you going to do something on The Bengal Bouts, Bookstore Basketball, Vagina Monologues, The Women's Soccer Team?
Thought u ND fans might like this...