Taking out the start is entirely up to you. I will say that some readers might be taken back a bit by the start. To me, it did feel like you went 0-120 in two seconds with that start then immediately hit the brakes and went on into the rest of the story. It was an entertaining example for sure, but at least in my opinion, a bit much. But like I said, it's up to you if you want to change it or not.

Hey Kyle! I enjoyed your article on Serena!!!!

You've been knocking them out of the park lately, Kyle. Congrats.

Fanned back! Thanks for fanning, Kyle. I like your work, too.

thanks for becoming a fan of mine...lol it was looking funny at zero..lol, it looks better now...

I won't because returners don't audition. Good luck though. Let me know how it goes.

It's called Duck TV now. Basically we film the sporting events, editing them and have anchors read them. It's a good intro into the TV side of things. Here's some info on it.

http://cinema.uoregon.edu/events/screenings/duck-tv-auditions

Anyways. I would highly recommend it. It's a lot of fun and there are some great people to work with.

Hey,

I noticed you go to the U of O. Have you thought of auditioning for Duck U. I've done the sports section for a year now and it's a pretty good resume booster. Anyways, I think auditions are this Thursday and Friday.

Petty or Earnhardt? Ricky Bobby

haha.. he's my favorite too! and the extent of my NASCAR knowledge.

Thanks for fanning me on here, I seriously appreciate it. I hope your 49ers beat the Seahawks today, Pete Carrol is such a douche.

Hey man, I have been informed by B/R that you are my first official fan. Sweet! They suggested that I post on your bulliten board. Good stuff on your Giants articles.

Go Giants!

Nadia