Idk how the comments got deleted on my article but no hard feelings at all. I appreciate the constructive criticism and take it to heart. I'm only a college kid trying to hone my sports writing craft between school, work and a social life, so when I make mistakes I want to be the first to know about it. so I thank you for bringing everything to my attention and again, i appreciate the constructive criticism.
Thanks for the comments my man and again no hard feelings and I hope to communicate with you further here on B/R!!!!