Hey Bert—Dave Mo here, a Bleacher Report Community Coordinator.
I've been spending time on our College Football page and read a couple of your old articles. Really on-point analysis...you do good work.
Given that you haven't written in a while, I thought I'd check in and see if you're interested in picking up your coverage again. What do you say?
If not, it would be great if you could give me some feedback on why you decided to stop writing and what we could have done to better serve you. If you wouldn't mind, please shoot me a line at email@example.com with any thoughts.
Thanks so much,
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on last week's Carrying On...here's the latest edition:
I always appreciate when a writer asks for clarification, so thanks for asking.
Site style dictates that it should be "No. #." Additionally, it should always be the numeral when preceded by "No." and never written out, even if it is a number from one through nine.
Hope this clears it up. If you ever have any other questions, please don't hesitate to ask, and if you're looking for a quick answer, the site's style guide can be found here: http://bleacherreport.com/pages/styleguide
If you get a chance to read one of my weekly Carrying On About College Football articles, I'd appreciate it. Thanks!
check this out if you get a chance:
a story i feel is getting overlooked.
Thanks for the fan add!
Hey nice to hear from an old time Baylor fan. Most people today don't remember Baylor's "good old days". Some people know about the A&M-Baylor rivalry, but not many know that it is one of the more lopsided rivalries in college football-- for Baylor. Anyway, I'll be interested to see how Texas does when they hit the meat of their schedule. I hear they've got a shot this year...
No problem Bert. I agree, in that context "that" is more personal choice...and since it's your article, it's ultimately your choice! I guess I was trying to create more clarity, but I think your sentence can be understood with or without "that."
And yes, you're definitely getting there. Barely any edits on that last piece!
Appreciate the compliments Bert—you're doing great work thus far, keep it up =)
No problem Bert. It's tricky to remember all those little details—and if you miss any, I'm happy to clean them up!