thanks for the edit Evan
It was a deadly car crash because someone died in it. Both the crash and hospital was in No. Virginia. Other than that, I'm fine with the other alteration suggestions.
Thanks for the edits Evan!
Thanks for the edits Evan. I tend to write in a stream of consiousness, but you're right, it does make sense to organize the pros and cons together. I do think you need to support your position, however.
Tanks for the edits, but I'm going to change a couple back. I hate having one-sentence paragraphs. They look awful.
The hyperbole was being funny Evan. I'm sure nobody took it seriously, but people were ripping Paxson a new a--hole at the time, so I think my sense of humor fit the situation.
Thanks for the edits.
Thanks for the edits, Evan.