February 19, 2011
February 11, 2011
Thanks for checking out my Mets preview, Thomas. I reverted back to parts of the original article on two of the edits you made. I know numbers above nine should generally not be written in full, but this doesn't apply when a number starts a sentence. All numbers (no matter how high) should be spelled out at the start of a sentence. Also, you didn't need to add Perez's first name, because I used his name in full on the first reference.
Thanks for the help, Thomas!
Thanks for your edits and feedback
Thanks for the edits and kind words.
Thanks for the edits, but I already got the e-mail saying it's been edited but when I attempt to go in there it still says you're are editing it. I need to change something quickly.
Thanks for your help and feedback.
Thomas, thanks for the edit. The life expectancy came from the St. Petersburgh Times, who was quoting an study by the National Institute of Occupational Safety.
Thank you. I remember the doubleheader but since channel 11 televised both Yankees and Giants home games, I watched the Yankees who were home. The Giants' road games were not televised in New York.
Thanks Thomas for the edits and the feedback!
Thanks for the edits and comments!