Kelso Carpenter

Kelso Carpenter

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Working stiff stuck at a job he doesn't like when all he really wants to do is talk about sports all day.

In addition to my work at B/R, I also co-host a weekly DC Sports Radio show. Check us out: http://www.offtopicradionetwork.com

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  • Colin Kirschner posted 1567 days ago

    Colin Kirschner

    Kelso, I was wondering if you don't mind and have a second, could you give me some advice on the commas?
    I agree most of them do look out of place.
    Through out the writing process on here I'm constantly told you need a comma here at the beginning when introducing an object.
    Any help would greatly be appreciated.
    Thanks
    Colin Kirschner

  • Colin Kirschner posted 1567 days ago

    Colin Kirschner

    Kelso, I was wondering if you don't mind and have a second, could you give me some advice on the commas?
    I agree most of them do look out of place.
    Through out the writing process on here I'm constantly told you need a comma here at the beginning when introducing an object.
    Any help would greatly be appreciated.
    Thanks
    Colin Kirschner