Lyoto Machida Vs. Thiago Silva: Your Verdict?
10/06/2008
I am a massive sports fanatic & literally watch it all the time! Writing constructive & informative articles via the online media is a great way to discuss sport in a fair manner. In World Football, at club level I support Manchester United & at national level England as I moved there at age 12. I was born and lived in New Delhi, India so am a huge fan of India's Cricket team. I watch a range of sports with; World Football, Cricket, Tennis, Olympic Games, F1, MMA etc. being some examples!
The article looked really good. It is obvious that you have done some writing like this before. The more articles that you can turn out like this the better. You showed great balance between both points of view. Perhaps the only recommendation I would have would be to get to the meat of the story sooner.
Your title suggested a break down of the fight. The lead in was good, but it didn't really need to be there. Pull in the reader quickly and get to the just of the story.
Otherwise, great job and welcome to the Bleacher Report!
437 days ago
I am very glad that MMA is included in your favorite sport's line-up. Your article is very good. Welcome to the MMA community!
440 days ago
Hey Varun,
Welcome to our Bleacher Report World Football Community. I can see you've got of to a flying start. I enjoyed reading your first two articles. Keep up the good work.
Dont Hesitate to ask me or Andrew McNair if you have any questions. Thanks again and I hope you enjoy being a part of our ever growing community
Salaar.A.Shamsi
World Football CL
B/R
445 days ago
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Dorothy Willis said...
DeleteI hope you will write more MMA aticles in the future.
431 days ago