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  • Carl Cockerham posted 1488 days ago

    Carl Cockerham

    http://bleacherreport.com/articles/472309-oakland-raider-running-back-darren-mcfadden-may-have-a-200-yard-game-on-sunday

  • RaidersBlog.tk posted 1608 days ago

    RaidersBlog.tk

    Cory. I like what you write. Good ideas.

    I'd encourage to to expand upon what you have next time. Give me more, flush out those ideas.

    Normally I edit my own blog posts and Bleacher Report editors re-touch my articles on here, but they either didn't touch yours or did a poor job.

    Couple tips:
    1) Online paragraphs should be short
    2) Check the punctuation
    3) Avoid using "I" even if you are a fan or expressing your opinion
    4) Organize your ideas before you write and reorganize it after to make it easier to read.

    Practice is key and Bleacher Report is a good avenue to use.

    If you want to get a bit more serious consider looking into AP Style or taking a writing class (JC's are cheap) if you really want to get serious.

  • JW Nix posted 1700 days ago

    JW Nix

    this might interest you :
    http://bleacherreport.com/articles/351363-the-almost-all-time-chicago-bears-defense

  • JW Nix posted 1702 days ago

    JW Nix

    you like history? :
    http://bleacherreport.com/articles/350025-the-almost-all-time-chicago-bears-offense

  • Drake Eck posted 2217 days ago

    Drake Eck

    hey i hav completely edited my article and it is new and improved read and comment please

    http://bleacherreport.com/articles/15954-nfl-2008-power-rankings-and-predictions

  • Chad Hogan posted 2247 days ago

    Chad Hogan

    You should read my new articles

  • Drake Eck posted 2264 days ago

    Drake Eck

    i already put it up!