Is South Carolina Football a Hopeless Endeavor?
Sep 04, 2008
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Tell me how wrong I am.... ;-)
Gamecocks and Dawgs:
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/251474-georgia-bulldogs-south-carolina-gamecocks-dawgs-look-to-get-offensive
191 days ago
Hello Michael, I would like you to take a look at this article and leave your support in the comment area. I would love to see this story make a difference. Pass it around! Thanks
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/224275-ny-giants-george-martin-the-forgotten-hero
210 days ago
Hey What's Up?
Have you read my take on riots in sports? I think it is worth your time and you should check it out when you have the time!
Thanks, Jake
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/205507-riots-in-sports-la-lakers-riots-show-growth-in-us-riots
269 days ago
Hey There,
Have you read my top 10 things to do to calm your impatience while waiting for the 2009 college football season? Check it out!
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/203407-10-ways-to-calm-a-college-football-fans-impatience-for-the-upcoming-season
272 days ago
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/116166-nfl-will-they-still-be-cheering-in-st-louis-for-the-super-bowl?just_published=1
Take a look at my new piece. I have tried to break away from World Football and had a stab at American Football.
417 days ago
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/93979-bcs-just-let-let-fat-kid-play-what-are-you-afraid-of?
459 days ago
If you care to look...
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/70304-from-section-312-five-thoughts-on-the-2008-atlanta-falcons
518 days ago
525 days ago
Nice updated pic.
Garcia has more practice time against Tyrone Nix's defense than anyone in the nation, so hopefully that works in his favor...
536 days ago
I read it and edited it. Nice job!
Here's where you can improve: Try to keep it tight.
In several paragraphs, you wrote like you were having a conversation. Keep it nice and tight, and by that I mean, look at every sentence and ask yourself: if I delete this sentence, will it change anything or will the reader not understand the message? If you answer "no", then delete it.
It's a difficult thing to get accustomed to, but I can give any article to any editor, and they can always make it tighter. Always. So....you did well on your first article!
Just try and tighten up the next one. Let me know when you have done it! Oh! If you want to see the revisions I made, click on the "show revisions" after you click on article history, and it will highlight what I did.
562 days ago
Appreciate the vote bro, good looking out.
563 days ago
Thanks for the love!
564 days ago
Thanks for the pick. Looking forward to reading some of your stuff. :)
-Lise
583 days ago
Thanks for the add, Michael!
Hugs!
-Lise
585 days ago
Hot Read: Bronze Medal
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