I graduated with a degree in English with a concentration in journalism and now I write whenever and where ever I can.
Thanks for the support and edit.
Dorian, thank you for checking out the article and your input.
Thanks for the edit.
Thanks for the edit.
Yeah, a bit strange, but I think that Man City are paying all of his wages. For Manchester City it's a great thing. They get to keep a really good player on teh books, with regular first team football but deprive other Premier League clubs of his services, and still have the prospect of bringing him back if needed.
Thanks for the tweak Dorian. I appreciate it greatly. Sometimes you can't see the wood for the trees, when you reread your own work.
Thanks again.
Dorian can you take a look at this article for me?
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/438741-craig-bellamys-cardiff-city-move-in-jeopardy-a-championship-week
Thanks for the edit Dorian
thanks for the feedback
One more thing Dorian: "In fairness to Hanie, who was injured in the game, was not protected by the line well, despite facing a second string Chargers defense." - that does not sound right. You really need to read things through so it makes sense my friend. I do believe a "he" needs to be included between the words "game" and "was".