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I am a talented sports writer from Dallas,TX who loves sports and will always support my local Dallas,TX teams such as the Cowboys and the Mavericks. I am an avid sports watcher from football to baseball because that's how I roll, but the most important thing for people to know about me is that I am going to bring you a show like T.O. would say so "Get your popcorn ready"... yeah boyyyyyyyyy..Im back and ready to the sports world by storm!!GO Cowboys!!!! Super Bowl.
a remembrance :
Hey Tee—Dave Mo here, a Bleacher Report Community Coordinator.
I've been spending time on our Cowboys page and read a couple of your old articles. Really on-point analysis...you do good work.
Given that you haven't written in a while, I thought I'd check in and see if you're interested in picking up your coverage again. What do you say?
If not, it would be great if you could give me some feedback on why you decided to stop writing and what we could have done to better serve you. If you wouldn't mind, please shoot me a line at email@example.com with any thoughts.
Thanks so much,
Tim who? Florida who?... Seriously, if you read any of my articles, you will see that I have Florida winning the East and Auburn winning the West. Thanks for the note, though.
I just wanted to let you know that Bleacher Report has launched out of beta with an updated look and feel and some great new features. Check out the "Game On" link in the header to find out more.
Next week we'll be launching the site to the world with some public announcements—and it'd be great to get a contribution from you between now and Tuesday to make Bleacher Report's launch a success.
Let me know if you need any help with ideas or have questions. Have a great weekend tee!
Tee, your articles are great. The thoughts you put forth are great, they're new and need to be heard. You just need to remember you are writing for an Internet based audience. People don't read the Internet, they scan it.
Long paragraphs tend to hide great thoughts.
Try breaking up your paragraphs to make the entire article more readable. A suggestion would be to write your article in full. Edit your writing as you normally would (spelling, grammar, etc.) and then go back through and see how you like the way it flows.
If feels like you are plodding through or getting bored with the piece, break up the sentences to make short, succinct paragraphs.
Try it out. Let me know what you think. Your writing is getting better.