Hi Mark, this is a great idea for an article, the supporters perspective of match day is something that is not done hardley at all on here. Wih some work I think it could be very successful. Unfortunatly there are alot of issues to clear up before it can be. firstly, presentation, a major factor on bleacher as no one will bother to read it if it doesnt look presentable. paragraphs and full sentences are a must, a great title with lots of key words that tells readers straight away what they are going to get is another issue.
As i was reading, I did get the feel of being there with you, but it felt so rushed as u was writig like u just wanted to gt it over with, try and pad out ure sentences as much as possible and make sure they are complete and not shortend versions. tags is another problem, you cant put as many as u can get on there as it pushes articles off of sites before they are ready due to an article that shouldnt be there and it will start to annoy other writers which in turn will not create a good name for ureself.
I am not the best with puncuation etc someone like alex dimond will tidy that up for you, I like to hel with substance and presenatation and I hope my ideas are ok for you, just revert back to your own version if you prefer, thee are only suggestions for you Mark. I hope you take some of this constructive criticism on board as I feel you have a great angle here to use on Bleacher and if presented in the right way, will make a great name for you and get you alot of reads and comments, good luck mate, Jamie.
i'm yoosof farah, the community leader for aston villa here on bleacher report. in order to build up that community and get the mighty aston villa known to all here on b/r, and the 2 million readers this site has each month, i was wondering whether you could show your passion for aston villa and write some articles about them, such as: match previews, match reports, news on injuries, contract extensions, etc. such articles would be very much appreciated, and would definitely help a lot in building up the aston villa community and getting the club known to all on this website, and indeed the 2 million unique readers on here each month.
I'm going to start by trying to build out the Aston Villa fan base. I was wondering if you would be interested in writing an article about:
1. Aston Villa and what they need to do to prepare for Arsenal and Man U coming up in the next two weeks.
2. The success of Agbonlahor and Carew thus far, combining for 11 goals.
3. The effects of Ashley Young's new four-year deal and what to expect
Kindly let me know which one of those article topics appeals to you most, and go ahead and start writing away! I greatly appreciate your hard work on B/R towards the EPL.
I look forward to your Aston Villa articles in the future...What do you think about Gabriel Agbonlahor's success?