The Cowboys Personal Thanksgiving Superbowl...
11/26/2009
Electrical Engineer and Owner of Automotive Robotics in Denton, TX.
Worked my way through college as a Reporter and Photographer for a weekly newspaper in Colorado Springs.
Yes, the Cowboys are the US's most valuable sports franchise because they host a Thanksgiving game every year. That's also why the Detroit Lions are the...
Chad Hensley replied…
No, your argument is that the Cowboys are the most valuable because of the Thanksgiving game....
Steve Duran replied…
Ok, so your in denial. It's a serious advantage attracting players with attitudes and large egos....
Year after year the Cowboys host their own private Superbowl on Thanksgiving day. Jerry Jones has parlayed this advantage into professional sports most valuable franchise...
this man belongs in Canton :
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/265091-crazy-canton-cuts-don-coryell
64 days ago
Hey Steve,
I can now post on other people's BB and not use PM, Yeah! If you could please check out my latest installment. It's a follow-up article to one on Twitter and sports that I wrote in August. Please check it out and tell me what you think. Thanks in advance!
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/264543-bleep-tweet-the-nba-bans-twitter-should-other-leagues-follow
65 days ago
Hello Steve, I would like you to take a look at this article and leave your support in the comment area. I would love to see this story make a difference. Pass it around! Thanks
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/224275-ny-giants-george-martin-the-forgotten-hero
104 days ago
What is with the water in Chesapeake Virginia?
They have lots of Great athletes.
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/217653-whats-in-the-water-in-chesapeake-virginia
144 days ago
Hey Steve, wanted to see if you'd take a look at my article and let me know what you think. It's about the Raiders front four.
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/203675-the-oakland-raiders-front-four-getting-nasty-in-the-trenches
167 days ago
Hey I would appreciate some input on my article: The Five Worst Sports Announcers in NY
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/198557-the-five-worst-sports-announcers-in-new-york
175 days ago
Hey...I would appreciate your input on my article about tweeting starring the fake Eli Manning:
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/196175-it-aint-me-tweetin-eli-mannings-fake-twitter-account-raises-questions
178 days ago
Hey...I would appreciate your input on my article about tweeting starring the fake Eli Manning:
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/196175-it-aint-me-tweetin-eli-mannings-fake-twitter-account-raises-questions
178 days ago
Raiders first 8 games prediction.
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/196104-oakland-raiders-schedule-first-8-games-predicted?just_published=1
Please comment! :)
178 days ago
I checked on ticket prices, Wow........
202 days ago
so does that mean you'll be at the Thanksgiving game? And what jersey/ hat will you wear. Since you don't know me that was a joke not a swipe at who you will be rooting for.
202 days ago
Steve,
Glad you liked the edits, I didn't do any of them though! ha I logged on to check it out and it had already been edited by two different people (I think Mosang Miles is the one that changed the headline); Anytime you got something you need looked at, just shoot me a message or e-mail and I'll be glad to get to it.
- Ben
204 days ago
Steve,
To answer you question. What I removed in all those cases was the double spacing. When writing in AP or B/R style, you only use one space after a period.
Also, the first names were removed because in AP style, you only use a person's last name once they have been referenced once. If you added them back, that's cool too, it's ultimately your article, but those are the changes I'm required to make.
You have great writing ability though and the article had very few changes needed, other than the spacing. Keep the articles coming man!
- Ben
205 days ago
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