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11/15/2007
Glad the edits check out, Andrew. The general idea is that Internet audiences have short attention spans...so anything you can do to pare down your writing will make it more attractive to readers. You're right that short paragraphs are a good place to start, as well as short sentences and concise arguments. Based on your work to date, you seem to have a pretty good grasp of things...but let me know if you have any more questions.
--Ryan
747 days ago
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Zander Freund said...
DeleteHey Andrew,
I just wanted to let you know that Bleacher Report has launched out of beta with an updated look and feel and some great new features. Check out the "Game On" link in the header to find out more.
Next week we'll be launching the site to the world with some public announcements—and it'd be great to get a contribution from you between now and Tuesday to make Bleacher Report's launch a success.
Let me know if you need any help with ideas or have questions. Have a great weekend Andrew!
Zander
655 days ago