June 6, 2008
Hi my name is Vinnie. I'm a huge New York Jet fan. I wrestle in New Jersey where I am a state champion. I'm into any kind of sports but mostly follow UFC, NFL, and College Football.
Hey Vinnie welcome to BR! Keep up with the work and I hope Chipper can keep up the hot start.
Vinnie, I'm not working in firefox today so here's some editor's feedback.
Great article! I tweaked your headline and wrote a teaser. I also separated you paragraphs a bit and edited for style. Make sure everything checks out to your liking—keep up the awesome work and welcome to BR!