Seeing Red: Chicago Red Stars' New Draft Picks Hope to Lift the Team
January 20, 2010
I am a junior journalism student and member of the women's varsity soccer program at Northwestern University. Along with my studies in journalism I will also be pursuing a minor in gender studies. My passion for writing and sports has led me to work on several publications on campus including Schmooze, the only collegiate Jewish magazine published nationally and Abroad View, a study abroad magazine. Last summer I interned with the Women's Professional Soccer office and gained great insight on working inside a sports organization and publishing sports articles. When I'm not on the field or in the classroom you can find me outside either with my longboard or my camera.
THANKS =)
Hey could you "edit" my satire piece?? pretty please? http://bleacherreport.com/articles/403599-ufc-115-chuck-liddell-trades-in-a-six-pack-of-beer-for-abs
Grace, need your help with this.
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/390151-steven-gerrard-on-the-verge-of-joining-manchester-city
Grace,
Thanks for the compliment on my article and feedback. I am aware of the idea of keeping paragraphs short. I don't think I have any paragraph longer than 3 sentences in this article. However, some the quotes and other sentences are fairly long in this particular article.
Hey, you play soccer for NW. My oldest, graduated in 2007, played for Marquete University. Cool.
You might be interested in this: http://becomingatruechampion.com/
You can peruse the site using the links on the blue bar. Still working on publication though.
Your thoughts are welcomed.
Best
Kirk
Grace,
Thanks for the compliment on my article and feedback. I am aware of the idea of keeping paragraphs short. I don't think I have any paragraph longer than 3 sentences in this article. However, some the quotes and other sentences are fairly long in this particular article.
Hey, you play soccer for NW. My oldest, graduated in 2007, played for Marquete University. Cool.
You might be interested in this: http://becomingatruechampion.com/
You can peruse the site using the links on the blue bar. Still working on publication though.
Your thoughts are welcomed.
Best
Kirk
Thanks for the edit.
Thanks for the help Grace.
Edits look great. Thanks!
Thanks for the edit and the feedback
Can I get an edit when you get a chance? Thanks
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/387843-bellators-bryan-baker-tells-br-lombard-is-just-keeping-the-belt-warm