Thanks for the edits!
Thanks for the recent edit and feedback, Benjamin, much appreciated. And especially for noticing that mix-up with "heel" and "face" in the final slide; I'm sure I'd have got plenty of stick if that one had stayed in there!
Thanks for the edits, Benjamin!
Thanks for the edits and feedback, Benjamin.
I broke up the Snider brothers paragraph originally just so it wasn't quite as big a text block, but definitely see your point. And I'll work on getting the hyphens in the right spot. :)