December 20, 2009
My name is derek williamson, im a huge pittsburgh steeler fan have been ever since i can remember. i love to bass fish, i fish in tournaments around my home state.i love to wacth mma.
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I just read your article, and you did a great job. A couple of things you might want to consider...
Add a pole - People seem to like them, and it is a good way to start debate. It helps you get reads, and more time on the front pages.
The BR style, they like shorter paragraphs, normally two or three sentenses.
You might want to make your articles a little longer. If you can add some to it, people will become fans, and you can communicate with people that like your work.
All kidding aside though, it is a great job, especially for your first article. Any time you write one, feel free to post it on my wall, and I will be sure to add the tags, and comment.
Belated welcome to the Steelers community. My name is Nick and I am the Community Leader for the Steelers here on Bleacher.
If you ever have any questions, please feel free to ask. I am going to add some tags to your article, so that it can be seen on other areas of the site, such as the AFC North section.
Great job, and welcome to Bleacher!