Bryan Day

Bryan Day

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  • Maya John posted 1136 days ago

    Maya John

    Waiting your updates. http://goo.gl/h0fqDH

  • Scott Polacek posted 1199 days ago

    Scott Polacek

    Thanks for the edits today Bryan. Much appreciated.

  • Jim Flannery posted 1211 days ago

    Jim Flannery

    Thanks for the edits and feedback, Bryan. Much appreciated as always!

  • Robert Ivaniszyn posted 1212 days ago

    Robert Ivaniszyn

    Thank you for the detailed feedback on my article. I'm a bit rusty and should've checked the style guide, and compound modifiers love to troll me.

    In regards to your comment about large blocks of text, can you give any input as to at what point a block of text begins to be considered "long"? I felt I did a good job of chunking up the text into manageable pieces, but I'm open to the input about it.

  • Alan Hubbard posted 1235 days ago

    Alan Hubbard

    Thanks for the detailed feedback and edits, Bryan! I appreciate it greatly!

  • Jim Flannery posted 1241 days ago

    Jim Flannery

    Thanks for the edits and feedback, Bryan. I should know better than to not hyphenate a compound modifier. D'oh!

  • Alejandro 'Alex' Burgos posted 1243 days ago

    Alejandro 'Alex' Burgos

    Hi Bryan, thanks for the edits and pointers.

  • Grant Rindner posted 1246 days ago

    Grant Rindner

    Thanks for the edit, Bryan! Much appreciated.

  • Jamal Collier posted 1250 days ago

    Jamal Collier

    Thanks, Bryan!

  • Jim Flannery posted 1255 days ago

    Jim Flannery

    Thanks again for the edits and feedback, Bryan! Check out a game on YouTube on The Lacrosse Network's channel—you'll see exactly what I'm talking about. :)

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