He mate

wrote a piece which I tried to make my master piece. Could you please cheack it out. Don't be scared of telling me if it is bad

http://bleacherreport.com/articles/200865-painting-my-sports-idol

Hey mate.
Did my first slide show today. It is supposed to be humor. Tell me if you like it

http://bleacherreport.com/articles/197755-looking-at-sports-once-again-when-it-sickens-me#page/13

Pierre, I'm not working in Firefox, so the editor's feedback ins't working. Feel free to delete this comment if necessary.

Great article! I mainly edited for style, tweaking your headline and teaser, and also formatting your paragraphs and numbers. Make sure everything checks out to your liking—keep up the great work!