Thanks for reading and editing my article, Patrick.

Patrick,
Thanks for the edit and critique of my Shaun White piece. Just to quickly respond to a complete of your comments. The ad was included because I wanted to promote the soundtrack. Shaun took the time to do the interview, and I appreciate that. I figured I owed it to him, the US Olympic Committee, and AT&T to promote what they were selling. I am sorry if the title was misleading, but the truth is that it was selected soley for Google search reasons. Winter Olympics 2010 and Shaun White Interview had to appear, limiting my options. Lastly, the interview as done through a teleconference, not in person, so mannerisms, prescence, etc. were not an option, but I agree that would have been great to include. If you want to get a stronger feel for what my experience was like, which I kind of get the impression you did, check out my other piece on the experience....

http://bleacherreport.com/articles/348782-interviewing-a-gold-medalist-my-experiences-talking-with-shaun-white

Thanks,
Jon

Thanks for the edit and the feedback. I appreciate it.

Thanks for yet another edit!
Jon

Thanks for the help Patrick, I appreciate it.

I appreciate the edit. You were right on all aspects. Thank you.

Please look for my next article coming on Friday the 19th.

Thanks for the timely edits

Patrick,
Thanks again for the edit. I will add, "softball is no longer an Olympic sport" under the long list of things I didn't know! Thanks again.

Jon

Patrick,
Thanks for the edit. I took care of the extra slide.

Jon

9-7 won't get UVa in the Dance, 10-6 will if there's a Duke win. Also thanks for the edits, I appreciate it.