It's the Most Wonderful Time of the Year: Dallas Week
11/17/2009
Thanks for the edits and feedback. Much appreciated. Trying to get better at writing, so the hints are great.
5 days ago
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5 days ago
Dave I'm not sure youre acquainted with football here but I can see why that style miht seem scatterbrained. Especially since American sports articles tend to be statistic parties and as-is opinion pieces. Thanks for the edit anyway.
9 days ago
Hey David, thanks for the edits.
Couple of things—I'm British, hence the honour rather than honor, and suchlike. Kept the single o for Medal of Honor, but changed it for the others.
Also, for the same reason I can't justify including Veteran's Day in the title. It's called Rememberance Day over here, but saying "This is why we remember on Rememberance Day" would sound weird. (Granted, little more weird than a Scot calling it Veteran's Day.)
But I think I agreed w/ most of the rest. Cheers, I appreciate it.
17 days ago
Thanks for the edits. Re: the repetitive intro I was trying to KW load it for the SEs. Thanks for the other notes though, u pointed out some good things for me to work on.
18 days ago
Hey David, thanks for the kudos and edits on my Packers article.
In regards to Randy Moss after 2007, I agree it's unlikely that he was going anywhere but back to NE after reaching his first Super Bowl, but the mere fact that TT had a crack at him twice and nothing ever came of it rings volumes.
18 days ago
I'm not sure why things were breaking up either, but it isn't the first time this has happened. Anyway, thanks for your help.
22 days ago
David, that's such a nice thing to say. Thanks so much. And thanks for taking the time to edit. I really love B/R. Thanks again.
Poe
22 days ago
Hey, thanks for the insight on my article.
I just have to say this though; I'm not a Yankees fan, I'm a Mets fan. Yeah, I know, ironic right?
23 days ago
Hey man,
Thanks for the edit, I appreciate it. A lot of those things I do like parentheses and repetition I do on purpose. I use them for impact or humor, or whatever it may be. I like some of the things you did a lot, but some I'm going to revert back. Don't take it personally. Thanks again.
23 days ago
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http://bleacherreport.com/articles/277488-vinny-cerrato-has-hot-air-for-sale
34 days ago
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Zack Nally said...
DeleteThanks for the feedback. The encouragement helps alot...
4 days ago