October 25, 2009
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Thanks for the edits and feedback on my recent Baylor basketball piece; always appreciated!
Thanks for the edits. A few notes:
Dumpster is a brand name, so it should always be capitalized. The generic name would be trash bin or garbage bin. Something like that.
Also, I try to make my nouns and pronouns agree. If I say "Hawks" and am referring to the players, I use "they." Franchise or team, however, is singular.
You changed one of my sentences to "They are the franchise. They = plural. Franchise = singular.
I sometimes fail at this, too. I always appreciate any B/R member who takes the time to improve my work.
Thanks for the tweaks man! Appreciate you taking the time to look over my work and improve it.
Hey Jonathan, thanks for taking the time to edit my Georgetown piece (and especially optimizing the headline!). Here's hoping they'll keep it rolling through March.
Thanks for taking the time to tweak my work into better shape. Appreciate it my friend.
Looking forward to covering a competitive game Thursday night. Probably won't be much of a crowd with the rainy weather we have here in LA. Might just be us hacks along press row!
thanks for the feedback on my Favre/Vikings piece.
Thanks for the edits and feedback. It's much appreciated.
Thanks for the edits!
Thanks for the edit Jonathan, I really appreciate the help.
thanks for taking time to help me out. im really new at this but really wanna do this with my life, so i need some help thanks for everything man.