Martin Whaley

Martin Whaley


Graduate of IHS
Recent Sociology major at Alfred University and football player
Avid fan of LeBron James and the Cleveland Cavs

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  • Onalee Carson posted 3504 days ago

    Onalee Carson

    Martin, the editor's feedback isn't working for me. I hope you don't mind if I post it on here, although feel free to delete it if you'd like.

    Nice article. I formatted your paragraphs, tweaked the teaser, and corrected some grammatical errors. Make sure everything checks out to your liking—good work!