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Joaquin Encinas from San Luis az, born in yuma Dec 27 1980 Huge Yankee Fan since I have memory, been to Yankee stadium once. I am a web developer for the yumasun.com and private company encinas-hosting.com
Proud parent of emiliano encinas and married to carolina torres. Ever since I met carolina the Yankees have not won a world series, she come from a LA dodgers fan family I think she has some curse on the Yankees, that she will remove now that Joe Torre is in LA.
Joaquin, the editor's feedback isn't working for me. I hope you don't mind if I post it on here, although feel free to delete it if you'd like.
Nice article! I mainly formatted your paragraphs—seperating them so that the article flows nicely. I also corrected some grammatical errors and tweaked your teaser. Make sure it all checks out to your liking—good work!