May 15, 2008
Jack, I'm working from a computer without firefox so I can't use the editor's feedback. Feel free to delete this if you want.
Nice article! I just tweaked your teaser and headline a bit, corrected some grammatical errors and typos, and formatted your paragraphs—making them smaller to aid the flow of the article. Keep up the good work!
thanks for the pick of the day! glad you like it.