Jack, I'm working from a computer without firefox so I can't use the editor's feedback. Feel free to delete this if you want.
Nice article! I just tweaked your teaser and headline a bit, corrected some grammatical errors and typos, and formatted your paragraphs—making them smaller to aid the flow of the article. Keep up the good work!
Jack, I'm working from a computer without firefox so I can't use the editor's feedback. Feel free to delete this if you want.
Nice article! I just tweaked your teaser and headline a bit, corrected some grammatical errors and typos, and formatted your paragraphs—making them smaller to aid the flow of the article. Keep up the good work!
Onalee Carson said...
DeleteJack, I'm working from a computer without firefox so I can't use the editor's feedback. Feel free to delete this if you want.
Nice article! I just tweaked your teaser and headline a bit, corrected some grammatical errors and typos, and formatted your paragraphs—making them smaller to aid the flow of the article. Keep up the good work!
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