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A 23 year-old philosophy postgraduate student from Leeds, UK. Interests include: music, campaigning about issues relating to the environment and world poverty, theology, and Formula 1 racing.
Carl, the editor's feedback isn't working for me. I hope you don't mind if I post it on here, although feel free to delete it if you'd like.
Nice article! I just corrected some minor comma and word choice errors and formatted your paragraphs—shortened them so that the article flows well. I also re-wrote your teaser so it wasn't a repeat of the first lines of your article. Make sure everything checks out to your liking. Great work!