APhillies' Last Stand
09/15/2009
I am currently a senior enrolled in Penn State University's John Curley Center for Sports Journalism.
Thanks for the edits and headline tweak on my T-Mac piece. Always appreciated!
5 days ago
Hey Matt, thanks for the feedback.
I thought the goal was to add as many tags as are relevant, and I thought Stats and Moneyball fit my article pretty well. But I trust your judgment.
8 days ago
Hi Matthew. Thanks very much for the edits on my article about Chase Utley.
That paragraph you fixed looks much, much better now.
That was definitely one of those cases were I as a writer knew what I was talking about, but could defenitely see how the reader could take it as Utley tieing Jackson for most ever home runs(not just in a single series).
Anyway, thanks again!
22 days ago
Packers/Vikings, Sleepers, an upset pick and more!
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/282249-sunday-morning-under-the-helmet-what-to-watch-for-in-nfl-week-eight/show_full
25 days ago
Matthew, thanks for the edits, but I was wondering if you were the one who changed my headline? "Come to Think of it" is part of all of my headlines, it's just something I do. No worries, I put it back. Also, I wasn't intending the article to be "satire" or I would have tagged it "humor." Yes, it's a fantasy, but I wouldn't really think of it as humor. As an FC, I thought I had more discretion over those things.
Anyway, just wanted to touch base.
Regards, Bob
26 days ago
Matthew-the scripts for spell check and whatnot are blocked at work, so I couldn't spell check anything (although I should probably be working at work, but that's really over rated!). As for all the mistakes, sorry! I'm barely a writer and am far from an English pro, so the mistakes are bound to be plentiful! LOL! I do appreciate your taking the time to clean up the article, though!!!
26 days ago
Hey Matt, thanks for your feedback! The title change is fine.
27 days ago
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Lewie Pollis said...
DeleteThanks for that, Matt!
1 day ago