Claire, would you please take a look at my most recent article. Thank you in advance!

Hi Claire, Thanks for the kind words and the edit! Your work makes me look better!

Hey Claire..

Thanks for the edits! I appreciate it.

-Shaun

Thanks for the edits. But the feedback was strange to say the least. I admit I make a few mistakes here and there but I am not an idiot and do not need to be talked down to like I am one. I overlooked the punctuation error. That happens nobody is perfect.

Thanks for the edit hopefully you didnt spend too much time cleaning up my mistakes.

Thanks for the edit and feedback!

thanks for ytour feedback on my recent articles I appreciate your insight

Thanks for the feedback and edit. That piece on the Olympics certainly wasn't my best work, and I knew an editor would find something wrong with it.

Hey, I just wanted to say I value your feedback and any help you can give me.
If it's possible maybe you could check out my most recent article. I don't know, but I just feel like the headline needs some tweaking. Any advice?
Thanks so much.
Jeff

http://bleacherreport.com/articles/42481-hey-fifa-look-at-this-isnt-this-slavery

Thanks for the editing job! It is a smoother train of thought now!