A Makeover For Soccer in America
08/08/2009
I'm a senior broadcast journalism major at Northwestern University. I'm Originally from upstate New York, but I call Albuquerque, New Mexico home. I love the Cubs, University of New Mexico Lobo basketball and a good game of pickup basketball.
Thanks for reading over my latest Astros breaking news piece. Appreciate it...
26 days ago
Hey Patrick,
Thanks for the feedback and the edits, much appreciated.
Matt
42 days ago
Being such an apparently awesome writer, you could probably use better words than "garbled" when leaving feedback on articles.
69 days ago
Thanks for the editing. I'd go with Donald Brown this week. The Ravens should not be kind to Larry Johnson.
Thanks for tweaking the title and taking out the embedded pic. B/R always goofs the formatting when I embed a pic on my own site for some reason. I always have to delete the HTML manually.
76 days ago
I am guessing you changed the title of my article to "Rise of the Machine:". I liked it more than mine. Thank you.
77 days ago
Thank you for the edit...I did feel the need for one minor change after that.
78 days ago
Hey Pat, thanks for the feedback on my last article, as you can probably tell, grammar isn't one of my stronger points. but I'm working on it. Hope you enjoy this article!
this definitely makes an interesting read:
http://bleacherreport.com/articles/250583-college-football-playoff-addition-to-tradition?just_published=1
If the fans are serious about this, we should do this. we all have a voice in this good ol' country of ours.
78 days ago
Thanks for the edit and the feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to give my article a look.
80 days ago
Thanks for the edits and kudos, Patrick.
The numbers thing is the one thing I always slip up on, and not because I don't know it, merely because I just type things so fast, I sometimes forget about some small details
Thanks for bringing it to my attention, though. Good luck with your ventures.
-Kevin
82 days ago
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Bret Feddern said...
DeleteThanks for the edits. I have actually been told otherwise on the commas by previous editors, though.
17 days ago