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No problem about the edits. I really appreciate your feedback on my board - I'm always happy to learn about both my strong and weak sides of editing.
Yes, you are right about the length of the sentences, and I'm the kind of person that follows the "keep it short and simple" philosophy, but I realize that, at times, that does take away from the creativity process. I do apologize for that, but I'll keep that in mind for the next time.
And, I just want to say about the title - you see, I thought that "God" was referring to the final, but I apparently misinterpreted it. Now I see what you were trying to say!
Take care, buddy, and read ya later! --- Dusan
Well, growing up in broncoville, you didn't have much to root for, but since I did have an outlet, reading about the glory days, Tatum, Casper, Willie Brown, Skip Thomas, even QBs like Blanda, Stabler, Davidson, Lamonica, and Flores.....I studied the heritage well.
Almost wish my dad would have moved to cali, when he had the chance, but since there was no family, we stayed in the Dakotas.
Always some hope to hang onto...I can imagine people had already written the Raiders off, when Plunkett took the reins, back in 1980. Only history can see what happens when the odds look bleak.
Only question remains, is if they're going to rise to the occasion....or discover the law of gravity.