jared shope

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  • Jordan Heck posted 1840 days ago

    Jordan Heck

    thanks for the comment bro

  • Tron Hallz posted 1850 days ago

    Tron Hallz

    Great article- some original picks. Your right, I had forgotten about most of these clowns. You asked for feedback, so here it goes. Keep an eye out for punctuation. Like on the first page you ask a question with out the "?". Also, watch out for redundant phrases such as, "Edwards was drafted 13th overall in the 1999 draft by the Steelers". This should read as: Edwards was drafted 13th overall in 1999 by the Steelers. Finally, try to stay away supporting your stance by saying somebody "sucks". We know they suck that's why their in this article. How do they suck? Perhaps a dropped ball stat could be helpful in supporting your premise. I encourage you to continue to write. I wrote four 800 word articles that I hated before I finally published one on this site. I've only published two, but I already hate my first one. Point being- with effort you will improve very fast. You already show good knowledge and story idea's. KEEP IT UP!
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