2009 NBA Playoff Overview
05/16/2009
I'm a Junior at Sonoma State where I write for the Star paper
I recently landed a summer internship with Bleacher Report writing and editing
If anyone wants comments or critiques on their writing I would love to help...and I'll be posting some of my own work up pretty soon so maybe you could return the favor.
Gotta love the bay area...go Sharks
Thanks Mitch for the edits & kind words! Very much appreciated!
104 days ago
What is Joey Dorsey's real height? I talk about that and his status with the Houston Rockets in my latest article.
Please check it out and provide your comments. Much appreciated!
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http://bleacherreport.com/articles/231323-joey-dorsey-what-is-your-real-height
112 days ago
Thanks for the edit sir. I need all the help I can get. Yes I did talk about the Takayama fight with Frye. It came up when I asked him about his most cherished of fights. It did not seem that he liked talking about himself so much as just shooting the breeze. But we did breach the topic briefly.
120 days ago
YES sorry, i wrote an article regarding the reason BR deleted my article for no reason) so now they are childishly punishing me, not giving me any exposure ( tag , or editing que wise.)
122 days ago
Could you edit this too please..*why you went way back and edited my old one that had been edited ten times is beyond me, LOL..I have two recent ones that desperately need editing.. thank you in advance http://bleacherreport.com/articles/223172-juan-manuel-marquez-i-will-target-floyd-mayweather-jrs-ribcage
125 days ago
my latest please edit..http://bleacherreport.com/articles/223583-kimbo-slice-is-a-bare-knuckle-boxer-first-and-foremost
125 days ago
Mitch, I want to say I'm sorry for my harsh commits. You are an excellent editor, and you was only trying to enhance my article. I was wondering, and hoping I didn't upset you with my foolish insults, and if not would you be willing to show and teach me a better way of writing.
Thanks.
130 days ago
Oh yes, by any chance did I happen to mention that I love when critics or people like yourself hate on my articles. I just love it.
Thanks for being the biggest hater.
130 days ago
Thanks again, Mitch. It seems someone felt the need to ruin a brilliant masterpiece.
130 days ago
Mitch, man. It seems to me there wasn't much of a problem with my article. Instead it was you removing excellent sentence away from an interesting article. Since you are the editor don't you think it makes sense to keep all my details, rather than removing them?
I'm very disappointed, and if anything, your criticism just made eager to write more as I now have stronger confidence than ever. I just want to say thanks for boosting my confidence level.
130 days ago
Thank you, Mitch, though you didn't stick with the orginal version. I hope I wasn't that bad. Can you send me a message on why you felt I didn't have clarity in my article.
But aside from that, thank you.
130 days ago
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Anurag Bhatt said...
DeleteThanks for the edits Mitch :)
103 days ago