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Sports is one of many loves. I'm the senior editor for the Bear Zone (MercerBears.blogspot.com) and a columnist for Mercer University's Cluster Newspaper. I also work for Mercer Athletics and the Atlantic Sun Conference broadcasting games through webcasts on ASun.TV

J. Andrew's Recent Articles

Mercer Bears Basketball the Hottest Ticket in Town!

Published 2 days ago
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Mercer edges GCSU 69-66

Published 3 days ago
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ATLANTA - NOVEMBER 08: Head coach Jim Zorn of the Washington Redskins looks on during the game against the Atlanta Falcons at Georgia Dome on November 8, 2009 in Atlanta, Georgia. (Photo by Kevin C. Cox/Getty Images)

The Third Half: Don't Look at the Coach

Published 3 days ago
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Men's Basketball Preview 2009-10

Published 6 days ago
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Ari Kramer responded to a comment on MVC, Horizon, CAA, MAAC, WCC: Who's the Best of Mid-Major Basketball?
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The Short List What J. Andrew thinks about sport's most pressing questions

Favorite Athletes

Warrick Dunn, Lance Armstrong, Josh Hamilton
Favorite Sports Teams

Atlanta Falcons, Tennessee Titans, Atlanta Thrashers, Nashville Predators, Orlando Magic, Tampa Bay Rays
Favorite Coaches

Bill Curry, Steve Spurrier
All Time Sports Moment

David Tyree's catch for the NY Giants in a crushing defeat of the Patriots in the Super Bowl
Most Memorable Game Attended

Longest Game in Tampa Bay Rays history
Most Unbreakable Sports Record

Most Points by a single player in an NBA game
Ruth or Mays?

Ruth
Unitas or Montana?

Unitas
Jordan or Russell?

Jordan
Gretzky or Orr?

Gretzky
Pele or Maradona?

Pele
Federer or Sampras?

Federer
Tiger or Nicklaus?

Tiger
Petty or Earnhardt?

Petty
Schumacher or Senna?

Schumacher
Pac 10, Big 12, Big 10, SEC, ACC, or Big East?

SEC

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by Pierce
7 months ago

Good lordy! No kiddin'! You write a bunch of stuff. What are you majoring in at Mercer? Are you looking at possibly going into sports journalism?

The only tip I would have for you specifically (which I kinda mentioned in my edit of your article) is to maybe cut back on the depth/length of your articles. I know that sounds strange, but in "the real world" you will never have that much room to squeeze a 500-word golf article on a page. The point of journalism is to say the most important stuff in the least amount of wordage.

Not only that, but who's going to read a 500-word golf article? We are a society of Twitters and Facebook statuses - nothing over 140 LETTERS, much less 500 words. People want their information quick, fast, and to-the-point.

For what you're doing on the blog, I think it's just fine. But, in the mean time, maybe you could practice shortening those articles up. Practice writing 100, 200, 300-word articles and trimming them down so that they are strong and lean.

Otherwise, your writing is really good and really fluid. Definitely solid! Send me a message if you'd ever like me to read over anything!

Pierce

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Men's Basketball Preview 2009-10

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