There is a classical poem about a crow:
The Raven by Edgar Alan Poe.
David Loiseau "the Crow" fights MMA
His savage skills would scare Poe's Raven away!
Swooping down with elbows so sharp;
Like an eagle's talons clawing their mark
A dark and silent force and strength
Fighting the distance, going the length
To win not just the fight but the cheering fans;
A force forever more unleashed is this "Crow man."







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4 months ago
I won't thank you for paring down my poem until David tells me how he likes the original version. My other poems are 3 for 3 without any editing and I won a poetry contest with my first poem "GSP" which was printed in an anthology on the very first page.
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